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    Emotions

    Hey everybody, I made this a long time ago and I never got to get it on here, but anyways tell what you guy's and girl's think! ^_^



    Crushed in a sad world
    Looking for a way out
    But the door is locked
    I couldn't scream or shout

    Can't solve a problem
    A riddle can't be answered
    What must I do?
    Find a cure for cancer?

    I wanna be in a better place
    Trying to get away from here
    Not running from emotions
    Only away from fear

    Too scared to face these demon's
    So many hurting each other
    I grew tired of this pain
    But it's getting harder

    Each time I resist
    It's dragging me deeper
    No longer reaching for the surface
    I am now called "The Grim Reaper"

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    Re: Emotions

    Hmmm... I like it... feeling that I have never felt- kind of evil... and sad and confused. Something really new to me... I'm quite speechless I guess ^^ lol

    Anyways, I enjoyed reading this, you've done a real nice work with this one!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Emotions

    i love it although my favorite of yours is the one that goes

    i stand in a rain of thunder
    my blood washing down on my face
    why do i do this
    my feeling is so disgrace
    and so on and so forth old poem though

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    Re: Emotions

    So much sadness in this one poem so much emotion as well to me! I love this poem it was just so great and it's cool that you made this a long time ago! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Emotions

    I can relate to this poem almost,yay!
    It was an excellent poem to read.I enjoyed every stanza of it,touching yet sad.

    Become a wind, unfathomable distress. I'll hold back your loneliness.

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