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    Emotions

    Sorrow
    We must hold it
    Like a delicate rose,
    To dangerous to hold,
    To beautiful to let go,
    We must hold it close
    But keep our distance.

    Pain
    We must use it
    Like a veil to cover our face.
    Hide other emotions
    Let nothing in,
    Let nothing out.

    Hate
    We must burry it
    Deep in our hearts,
    Save it for the right time,
    Control it,
    Cradle it,
    We must save
    The emotions
    Sorrow,
    Pain,
    Hate.

    Without it
    we are nothing

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    Re: Emotions

    Nice! Very original poem. I loved the metaphoric ways you depicted emotions here. Just out of curiosity, what do you think we do with our possitive emotions?
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    Re: Emotions

    It was dark like sombody who holds it in i really didnt like it it is what people who hold on do did not care for it.

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