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    Emotions

    You support me now and I’ll support you now.
    Words echoing through your mind,
    Shaking fingers run across a keyboard.
    I will never run away from reality.
    Emotions spike, temper flames out of control.
    Why do people make mistakes at times?
    With one omission everything falls apart.
    Anger at ones self takes command refusing to let go.
    I’m not talented with this,
    So we’ll hurt each other and ourselves.
    But can a friendship survive without strife?
    Unsure feelings and courage stands back to back.
    Being overly hard on yourself will burn you alive.
    When salivation is as simple as a friends offering.
    Shaking fingers run across a keyboard,
    Words echoing through your mind.
    You support me now and I’ll support you now.

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    Re: Emotions

    Quote Originally Posted by fireandice View Post
    You support me now and I’ll support you now.
    Words echoing through your mind,
    Shaking fingers run across a keyboard.
    I will never run away from reality.
    Emotions spike, temper flames out of control.
    Why do people make mistakes at times?
    With one omission everything falls apart.
    Anger at ones self takes command refusing to let go.
    I’m not talented with this,
    So we’ll hurt each other and ourselves.
    But can a friendship survive without strife?
    Unsure feelings and courage stands back to back.
    Being overly hard on yourself will burn you alive.
    When salivation is as simple as a friends offering.
    Shaking fingers run across a keyboard,
    Words echoing through your mind.
    You support me now and I’ll support you now.

    I have to say that when I read this I can feel the temper rising. My faroite is this part of the poem. Very good! I like to read more from you.

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