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    Unhappy Emotions set aflame.

    My mind is on fire. And i need to release all this crap inside. If you'd please. I will write a couple of poems. To let it out.

    Like an infant deprived of milk
    I need your love
    Life is so hard w/o it
    Born into a family w/o blood
    Neglected by an over protective father
    Self involved mother
    The unfailing victim of every good day
    No blood runs deeper than the grave they damned me to
    Set up well before I’ve died
    Planned my whole life
    Set it up to die
    I’m in it alone
    Watch me go crazy daddy
    There goes your baby girl drowning again
    Stand there and watch what you’ve done to me
    Look at my smile
    Its so beautiful on a walking dead girl



    Do you know I’m still here
    I have been waiting for your return
    Your home now
    Hours with out you
    Seems like a lifetime
    You kiss me a hello
    Like routine
    As if passion were ancient
    You don’t take in my presence
    Looking through me
    As if your looking for something important
    Sometimes I wish I was that
    The important thing you come home to
    You don’t even notice that I’m a mess
    I’m taking apart myself
    You’ve stopped picking me up
    Such bondage I’ve come to be
    But will cease to
    I’m fading now
    It’s alright
    You won’t even notice
    I don’t even matter


    Can not escape
    I am lost
    Yet you find me
    I try to disappear
    And you reveal me
    I repress my feelings
    And you expose them
    I can not run
    I can not drown
    Could not fly if I wanted
    My wings have never been
    And never will
    Unless I do the unthinkable
    An angel you call me
    An angel of death I suspect
    Death to my life
    Life that never was



    That's all for now. Now i can breathe lighter.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    I really liked the first section alot but then it just seemed like I have heard the rest all before. The first part was really good though, it was diffrent from other things I have read.
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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    wow that was really nice nympho, keep it up.

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    mmmmm I think I like the second one, but the others are good too.

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    An angel you call me
    An angel of death I suspect
    Death to my life
    Life that never was
    i like the angel of death thingy....really deep
    good job.

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    Wow, This is really good Myssy. Hm...The first stanza made me very sad...the 2nd stanza made me even more sad...then angry...and then jealous...and the 3rd...was a bit too deep for me...and I was lot.

    I hope things work out for you guys.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    I like it. the fact that its lengthy and with each phrase it has a strong meaning.

    I look forward to the next poem you create!

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    Re: Emotions set aflame.

    These are actually 3 seperate poems. If Anyone read what i wrote before the poems.

    I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.

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