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''Walking in circles''
''looking for answer''
'' trying not to lose my temper''
'' afraid of making an opening to others''
'' not making any sense when it comes to speak''
'' to people that surround will u seat''
'' afraid of taking hand''
''afraid of sinking on the hands of god''
'' things that are out in the world''
'' just like looking a treasure full of pearls''
'' looking for a sign''
'' of life and hapinnes''
''for the empty mind.mind,mind''
Well, I dont understand the use of the quotations... I'd like to see some elaboration. This poem seemed like bare bones work. Not enough thought process put into it.
A free verse poem, nice peom man, i don't really mind the quotes.
i like how you echoed the end of the poe like the mind was empty
very uniqe way of ending a poem i like it
i like your theme, really nice:D
I understood it overall and i like the idea of the poem but you make some things more stand out like you should elaborate like Kasai san said. Just work more on this poem. ^^