In your heart,
Upon your chest,
Within your soul.
You can't escape,
the pain within.
I crawls in your ears,
and out your eyes.
The pain you hear,
Its in your lies.
Its in the night,
the empty lies
they hurt the sight
of the third eyes light
Your soul is empty
and your eyes are dark
Your soul is as plain
as is your heart...
Your cries are empty
and there carried away
your eyes are empty
and there blank to anything...
Your as empty as the night and you are nothing in my third eyes sight...
This one is weird...and i am sortof scarred by it...cause i don't know what it means... -hides-
there are no raindrops on roses but there are still tears in my eyes...
shouldn't 'I' be 'It'?Originally Posted by Lost_Love
'there' should be 'they're'
'Your' should be 'You're'
but that is all of the mistakes I see- a good poem, but I don't really understand it...but as you said, neither do you
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
very morbid poem i love it and describing the pain of an empty
uncaring person who has no remorse over what they did or
said becuase they have no cares. almost like somone with
dark intentions i like where you went with this very awesome
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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