Thread: An Emptyness Inside of Me

Ok I know this peom doesn't really make any sense at all.
Trust me once I read it over I kinda lost myself. I had started out with something gentle but then I felt kinda guitly because of something that I'm doing but I don't know whether it's right or wrong....So half way inbewteen the peom and real life I just kinda blanked...I mean I really spaced out...Kinda sad I know maybe I'll just rewrite again and make it better then before.
So tell me what you think of it and no I won't get mad at aything you say
~Momo~
~aka riku-chan~

Poetry doesnt have to make sense to be beautiful. I thought this was one of your better writing's.
Dont touch this... don't rewrite it. I wouldn't change a thing.

Originally Posted by rikus demonic lover

Ok I know this peom doesn't really make any sense at all.
Trust me once I read it over I kinda lost myself. I had started out with something gentle but then I felt kinda guitly because of something that I'm doing but I don't know whether it's right or wrong....So half way inbewteen the peom and real life I just kinda blanked...I mean I really spaced out...Kinda sad I know maybe I'll just rewrite again and make it better then before.
So tell me what you think of it and no I won't get mad at aything you say
~Momo~
~aka riku-chan~

I liked your poem. It was really good. Kinda on the dark side, but good. You did well. ^_^

You know "Momo" is Japanese for "Peach" right? Just thought I'd throw that in there. ^_^

Lol that's cool to know. I actually did not know that my friend just gave me the name because Momo from...Uh I think from Bleach..He said I kinda reminded him of Momo so he gave the nickname Momo. Kinda funny actually.Thanks again for the comment!

Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Poetry doesnt have to make sense to be beautiful. I thought this was one of your better writing's.
Dont touch this... don't rewrite it. I wouldn't change a thing.

Thank you very much your means very much to me!