emtpy feelings

Where do I go from here,

I do not know.

I though I could fly,

but I am grounded.

I try to get back up again,

but all I do is fall again and again.

There are many times I want to quit,

but I do not.

I try to stay open minded to all things.
But all I really want to do is

close the world out.

So I do not get hurt anymore.
I must stay strong though all the hard times,
that may come my way in life.

I may be empy.
But I still have alot of heart.

wow deanna this is truly amazing. keep it up. I like your poems. I am looking to read more from you.

Very interesting format. There were some spelling errors, and you didn't capitalize many of the "I's". But I thought it was an interesting read none the less.

Hmm... this is good.. ^^ but something needed to be done with them spellings like peachy said.. :p... good work ^^ keep it up :)

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Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

wow deanna this is truly amazing. keep it up. I like your poems. I am looking to read more from you.

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thank you that you like the peom
and i will do my best to more up soon
thank again:smile:

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Originally Posted by Peach_follows

Very interesting format. There were some spelling errors, and you didn't capitalize many of the "I's". But I thought it was an interesting read none the less.

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thank you for the comment
and i take care of the errors as well
thanks again:smile:

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Originally Posted by RayMe

Hmm... this is good.. ^^ but something needed to be done with them spellings like peachy said.. :p... good work ^^ keep it up :)

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thank you i glad you enjoyed it
will take of errors as well
thanks again for your comment:smile:

What can I say............beautiful!!!!!!
I really, really like the way that you rhyme your work!!!!!

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Originally Posted by Astaroth

What can I say............beautiful!!!!!!
I really, really like the way that you rhyme your work!!!!!

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thankyou for your feed back
i glad you like it:smile: