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    emtpy feelings

    Where do I go from here,
    I do not know.
    I though I could fly,
    but I am grounded.
    I try to get back up again,
    but all I do is fall again and again.
    There are many times I want to quit,
    but I do not.
    I try to stay open minded to all things.
    But all I really want to do is
    close the world out.
    So I do not get hurt anymore.
    I must stay strong though all the hard times,
    that may come my way in life.
    I may be empy.
    But I still have alot of heart.
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    Re: emtpy feelings

    wow deanna this is truly amazing. keep it up. I like your poems. I am looking to read more from you.
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    Re: emtpy feelings

    Very interesting format. There were some spelling errors, and you didn't capitalize many of the "I's". But I thought it was an interesting read none the less.
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    Re: emtpy feelings

    Hmm... this is good.. ^^ but something needed to be done with them spellings like peachy said.. ... good work ^^ keep it up

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    wow deanna this is truly amazing. keep it up. I like your poems. I am looking to read more from you.
    thank you that you like the peom
    and i will do my best to more up soon
    thank again

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Very interesting format. There were some spelling errors, and you didn't capitalize many of the "I's". But I thought it was an interesting read none the less.
    thank you for the comment
    and i take care of the errors as well
    thanks again

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post
    Hmm... this is good.. ^^ but something needed to be done with them spellings like peachy said.. ... good work ^^ keep it up
    thank you i glad you enjoyed it
    will take of errors as well
    thanks again for your comment
    Last edited by LenMiyata; Sep 18, 2007 at 09:43 AM.

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    Re: emtpy feelings

    What can I say............beautiful!!!!!!
    I really, really like the way that you rhyme your work!!!!!
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    Re: emtpy feelings

    Quote Originally Posted by Astaroth View Post
    What can I say............beautiful!!!!!!
    I really, really like the way that you rhyme your work!!!!!
    thankyou for your feed back
    i glad you like it

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