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Well,as far as I read this it seems a doomsday is about to happen on your poem right?
at any cases I liked it much!
i had an assignment in english class that we had to use lines and phrases from a newspaper. so well here is what i got.
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What a piece of work is man
the reality of trying to live
the future is full
of clones and cannibals
city to city
lives that tragically crossed
the bare bones
unleash coyotes
fight in the works
too much trade shots
body language is loud and clear
hell may be next
it never gets loud
error kept secret
baffles police
man convicted
big boys don't cry
the way the world
test our will
amid chaos
changing power
shapes a new world
light shines
on dark ages
it's the final countdown
big step forward
gears up to save
future today
idiot will lose
trust your own judgement
the silent ENDS
Game Over
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well thats it. i usually don't " write" that way. did this while i was sick
SO that's it
Well,as far as I read this it seems a doomsday is about to happen on your poem right?
at any cases I liked it much!
I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
I loved my GF...
thanks for liking it. but i actually wasn't really refering to a doom's day.
i was talking about how much violence there is in the city/world. and how alot of crime is kept a secret. and if we don't change and admit that we have a serious problem we will be living in "hell". and how we should trust our own judgement instead of following without knowing.
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