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    This is the end...

    i had an assignment in english class that we had to use lines and phrases from a newspaper. so well here is what i got.
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    What a piece of work is man
    the reality of trying to live
    the future is full
    of clones and cannibals

    city to city
    lives that tragically crossed
    the bare bones
    unleash coyotes

    fight in the works
    too much trade shots
    body language is loud and clear
    hell may be next

    it never gets loud
    error kept secret
    baffles police
    man convicted
    big boys don't cry

    the way the world
    test our will
    amid chaos
    changing power
    shapes a new world

    light shines
    on dark ages
    it's the final countdown
    big step forward
    gears up to save
    future today
    idiot will lose
    trust your own judgement
    the silent ENDS

    Game Over

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    well thats it. i usually don't " write" that way. did this while i was sick

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    Re: This is the end...

    SO that's it
    Well,as far as I read this it seems a doomsday is about to happen on your poem right?
    at any cases I liked it much!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: This is the end...

    thanks for liking it. but i actually wasn't really refering to a doom's day.

    i was talking about how much violence there is in the city/world. and how alot of crime is kept a secret. and if we don't change and admit that we have a serious problem we will be living in "hell". and how we should trust our own judgement instead of following without knowing.

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