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    The End

    This is the end
    Of all humanity,
    I need a pen
    To save my sanity.
    This is the end
    Of all lullabies.
    I will miss my kin
    But I will not cry.
    This is the end
    My poem is done
    A letter to send,
    in which I will be gone
    .
    Last edited by thefallenangel; Aug 20, 2010 at 02:14 PM.

    Love looks with not the eyes, but with the mind.
    (midsummer night dream)

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    Re: The End

    I liked it. :3
    But like I'm a really big imagry and metaphor buff.
    Im sure if you add alittle of magry and metaphors in there itd flow EVEN better.
    Shippo is determined to become a lvl higher
    I'm a solider of Pen and Paper!
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    Re: The End

    thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    (grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr)

    Love looks with not the eyes, but with the mind.
    (midsummer night dream)

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