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    End of the line

    End of the line...

    Walking slowly,
    struts and frets from exhaustion.
    The mega yellow light burns,
    earth with no greens.

    The dead tree filled with vultures,
    and a few of them circles in the sky.
    It's a sign for me.
    Looks like the end of me.

    Smiling,laughing probably it's the heat stroke.
    Im completely out of my mind.
    Falling down on my knees,
    the surface was hard and im losing my cautiousness..

    My vision blurs...
    My body breaks down...
    So that was my limit...
    I said to myself...

    Right before everything is black and dark...

    Everything comes back to me...
    All my memories...
    My childhood...My life...My love...
    Every single of them in one second...

    Just before my body hits the ground...

    A small tear.
    I cried out of defeat,of frustation, anger,...
    feelings that can be explained by words alone.
    The true shed of tears.

    Another victim for the grim reaper....

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    Re: End of the line

    *wipes away ters* This is... wonderful... I love it... How can I like it? With so much pain, sandess and misery? How can I still like it so much? @.@

    Anyways you've put together death with that thing that freaked me out so much and created something that just makes me wanna cry... wonderful I must say...

    I'll be waiting forward for more, for more like this, even though I now seem to understand that these are not just poems... they just move me so much... *sigh*

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: End of the line

    aww... ty very much...thats so nice coming out from u ^^ i never thought it was that good... sheesh im surprised by ur comment ^^

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