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Now the world has turned to ash,
The last few people enslaved by the lash.
The adversary thinks he's won,
but he has yet to face the power of the son.
And in the end he will lose,
because God lets every man choose.
i thought this up in the shower last night after joining the debate on the end of the world. tell me what yall think.
Last edited by fayt lingod; Oct 30, 2006 at 02:32 AM. Reason: spelling
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
even if short, its sounds all right, a little more work and yo got a big poem, keep it up
I liked it a small little poeam that made you think nice job keep it up
lol. no intentions of changing it. i thought it up in the shower and decided to post it here.Originally Posted by hellknight
thanx for the comments anyway
thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!
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