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    Enigmatic World

    Closed eyes

    Insight that holds no catches,
    Formalities without a form.
    Falling upon a derived world,
    Confused of the light that shines so bright.
    Eyes peering through a heavy mist,
    Glaring at a place she does not know.

    A voice talking without a body,
    Being observed by nothing at all.
    Searching for a path to leave,
    Finding a door of many shapes.
    Seeing many others like her in this place,
    All as confused but none reachable by her presence.

    Light came through the small opening,
    Curiosity enthralled the women.
    Her eyes could see no longer,
    Blindness had once again come back.
    The world she knew was there anew,
    Darkness welcomed her with open arms...



    Inspired by the darkness of the writings that HellsPunker wrote here and there...
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    Re: Enigmatic World

    I really liked the way it flowed and went together. I could read over it easily and it just worked really well. It reminds me of a Linkin Park style song. It was very good, keep it up!
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    Re: Enigmatic World

    This is a very deep poem, great work on this it really makes me feel as if I'm this person! Way to go Soldat of Life!


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    Re: Enigmatic World

    ^_^ I love this poem~ One I really understand of yours~

    Its Beatiful~
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