I like this poem.. the way you repeat lay back, lay back and enjoy... It can be taken in many different ways and it's unique... It's sweet and caring... i would love to see more from you and keep up the good work.^-^
Thank you AngelicDemon201092, it'll probably be a little while before I write another one of these though. I've got two or three short poems, and the one poem I decided not to enter into the battle~Life competition I'll be posting next.
I'm glad this and The Path Down weren't ignored though. :2thumbs:
nicely done!^^ wheni ws reading it through i actually felt more relaxed, that my troubles didnt matter any more ^-^ so kudos to you:smile:
It has something in it... Something that makes it wonderfull to read, maybe it's because it's so short- it's really relaxing to read it because you don't have to think too much when you read it, you can just... enjoy...
It really made me feel back like to lay down.
Nice work... I hope to see more ^^
Thanks you two as well, I really didn't mean to write it as a dual meaning. What is that called? A happy mistake or something like that. :laugh:
I'm still amazed its been this well received. :2thumbs: