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    Enjoy the moment

    This is a wonderful world
    This is a wonderful place
    Butterflies flying so high
    Sun shining so bright

    Water flowing in a river nearby
    Bringing sounds of blissful sights
    A slight breeze of wind touching my face
    My eyes closing shut and my site growing dim

    The songs of the grasshoppers lulling me to sleep
    Sky so blue- no site of trouble
    What a wonderful summer morning
    What a blissful, dizzy feeling…

    Come, lie with me,
    Come, learn to enjoy the moment
    Come, feel the touch of the drying grass
    Come, let the sun shine on you
    Come, let a dream come true
    It’s ok to close your eyes
    It’s ok to forget-
    Let us fly!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    This is proof we're all connected. I swear I was just giving myself the " I need to enjoy my life" pep talk. then I saw this.
    You basically wrote the words I aspire to say to someone one day.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    That was really peaceful.
    I enjoyed it,within every stanza I could create an image in my mind.
    Write more^^

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    This poem was just so enjoying to read! I felt free reading and spirited as well! This poem was amazing and great really so I hope to see more Lasura!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    Thank You Peach, Thank You Seirika and Thank You Kuwi!!!!!!! ^^
    I'm glad you liked it so much and I'm glad you found it peaceful and nice to read- that is what I tried to achieve with this poem, so it makes me really happy to hear it worked, although, when I read it again, it didn't seem that peacefull as when I wrote it... ^^

    Thank You! ^^

    And Peach... they say great minds think alike ^^ lol

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    It's really very peaceful poem …
    I like read it...It makes me to clear my mind and enjoy this moment that you talk a bout it here …
    It touches the soul before than the mind ….

    Foolish beating

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    I'm glad you find it so xxoxx ^^ I'm glad you like it...
    I tried to make this one a peacefull one, but as always when I am trying to- I find something missing...

    Thank You very much!!! ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Enjoy the moment

    Wow, that was really good! It has a soothing, energetic feel to it, and it appears to me as a well-written song than a poem for some reason, especially the final stanza. Hmm, I don't quite know why... Anyways, now for some perfunctory remarks: Keep up the good work, and I hope to read more of your works. I am just kidding. =P

    I really wish to leaf through more of your poems in time! Keep 'em coming!
    Last edited by kedar; Aug 08, 2007 at 08:40 AM.

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