Anime Online
Home Forums Gallery Reviews RPG Journals (NEW) Arcade Register Rules / FAQ

Welcome to AnimeOnline.net, your personal Anime Community!

Anime Online Rulez!



Go Back   Anime Online > Mixed Flava > Poems

Poems Post poems Let the creativeness flow!

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
Old Jan 03, 2008, 09:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
Otaku
 
Chaos105's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: Unknown
Posts: 101
Thanks: 0
Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
Chaos105 may be famous one dayChaos105 may be famous one day
Enough?

Life's full of trials.
I did all I could.
I studied my books,
I trained my body,
I did everything to my extent
Through pain, sweat, stress.
Do you think this is good?
Is this enough?

Then came the tests, but
Just missed one number,
Just missed one line,
Just missed a question.
You were greatly disappointed,
You didn't accept anything.
Told me to better.
I tried, I did, but I'm thinking it was
Just not enough.

Then came the games.
Just wide of the goal,
Just missed that shot,
Just short of the down.
You screamed, you yelled,
You told me to do better.
I tried, I did, but I guess that it was
Just not enough.

I did my best through these trials.
I truly and honestly did.
But you did not see this.
You never did, never will.
You kept pushing me,
Closer and closer to the edge.
You tried, you did, and what you did was
Just enough.

Writer's Notes: First to say, nope, nothings wrong. I just had this in my mind and kinda wrote about it. Reminds me of a suicide note...@_@ Anyways, just decided to post this up. I don't think it's very good, I do see many things I can improve, but maybe I'll fix it later, maybe. Anyways, I'm trying to get back into writing again just to say.
__________________

They say, "I will die for my country." I never hear them say, "I will kill for my country."
Status: Offline
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On



All times are GMT -7. The time now is 05:35 AM.


Free MMORPG Games | Top 10 Lists | Naruto Shippuuden | Anime Wallpapers | Anime Freak | Ringtones | Anime Avatars | Anime Girls | Watch Anime Online | Anime Buddy Icons
Anime Online Banners by fooligar. ©
This Anime skin cannot be reproduced on any website without written permission from the Anime Online Staff.
vBCredits v1.4 Copyright ©2007 - 2008, PixelFX Studios
Ad Management by RedTyger

SEO by vBSEO 3.3.1

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93 94 95 96 97 98 99 100 101 102 103 104 105 106 107 108 109 110 111 112 113 114 115 116 117 118 119 120 121 122 123 124 125 126 127 128 129 130 131 132 133 134 135 136 137 138 139 140 141 142 143 144 145 146 147 148 149 150 151