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Reply With Quote"Another creative writing assignment" I honestly thought this was the begining of the poem. I suggest when you make a little side note like that. putting (Note: ) or (*) infront of it will help differentiate between that and the rest of the text.
*Another creative writing assignment*
I stand before a doorway
Leading into the unknown
I look on into forever
Marveling at what I’m shown
Stepping forward into nothing
Yet still finding a base
I’m led into the void
Ever searching for my place
History passes before me, the future whizzes by
I’ve seen ecstatic children laughing, the forlorn about to cry.
Reality is a memory in this forsaken land
But the infinite pools of knowledge are quick to take me by the hand
As I reach the end of my journey, I see the face of God
I feel as if I should bow to him, or respectfully applaud.
As I stare into His eyes, I notice something strange
The face I see is mine, both calming and deranged
My head, it starts to swell, as I realize this new fact
For all this newfound knowledge in my head is tightly packed.
As the sunshine hits my face, I awaken in new light
There’s no more quarrel within myself, for I have won that fight.
Last edited by NeoDeath90; Jun 04, 2008 at 06:38 AM. Reason: taking peach_follows's advice
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"Another creative writing assignment" I honestly thought this was the begining of the poem. I suggest when you make a little side note like that. putting (Note: ) or (*) infront of it will help differentiate between that and the rest of the text.
... Not Ever Again...
Whoa . . . . *blink* I feel like I just woke up from one of those dreams where I'd swear I was living out an entire lifetime but can't remember anything about it afterwards. Very good poem, very affecting. You have an impressive talent.
Tears are the feelings that a heart can no longer hold.
NeoDeath90 (Jun 05, 2008)
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