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Erase me from time.
Erase me from your memory.
Just let me be nothing.
I wish to unexist.
Erase me from your heart.
Erase me from your life.
Just let me go.
I'm toxic.
Erase me from my family.
Erase me from my friends.
Replace me with something better.
Something that won't end.
Erase my unimportance.
Erase my everything.
Nothingness is what I want.
To exist no more.
Ooooh......full of strong emotions and feelings....mostly anger...........but I like it.....since it has spunk!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!
It's funny that you see anger. All I can see is pain. But maybe it's because I'm inside it. I guess I can see where you would find anger. It's how I tend to deal with it. I'm actually quite sad though. Not angry.
Pain comes from anger too... this is depressing and it's like the ranting of a mind that gave up... nicely done.. ^^ keep it up...
Mm. I suppose theres plenty of inward anger that must be apparent... I suppose I mistake someone saying anger means I'm angry with someone. Rather then myself.
Another amazing poem from bratling!!!
The last stanza made me shiver. Amazing . . .
Wooo! ^_^ Thanks. I appriciate your compliments. Tee-hee. I like this one too.
wow bratling that was an awsome poem. keep it up I agree with Astaroth but also with ray pain comes from anger and that poem has alot of hidden anger hurt, sadness, and feelings of uselessnesity (random word trying to lighten this thread a bit) and one thing I can tell you is that you need to smile! :D: big smile:D: that always lightens the mood and I felt this one to your feeling of uselessness is what I feel sometimes but if you give up now, you wont be able to fullfill your dreams. damn rambling me. lol anyways keep up the work Brat and remember that I am always there if you need someone to talk to, me and all your other friends, no fading for you. you wouldnt let me fade so I wont let you.