Erase me.

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 03:32 PM

Erase me from time.
Erase me from your memory.
Just let me be nothing.
I wish to unexist.

Erase me from your heart.
Erase me from your life.
Just let me go.
I'm toxic.

Erase me from my family.
Erase me from my friends.
Replace me with something better.
Something that won't end.

Erase my unimportance.
Erase my everything.
Nothingness is what I want.
To exist no more.

Astaroth · Nov 08, 2007, 03:34 PM

Ooooh......full of strong emotions and feelings....mostly anger...........but I like it.....since it has spunk!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 03:40 PM

It's funny that you see anger. All I can see is pain. But maybe it's because I'm inside it. I guess I can see where you would find anger. It's how I tend to deal with it. I'm actually quite sad though. Not angry.

*RayMe* · Nov 08, 2007, 06:44 PM

Pain comes from anger too... this is depressing and it's like the ranting of a mind that gave up... nicely done.. ^^ keep it up...

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 07:48 PM

Mm. I suppose theres plenty of inward anger that must be apparent... I suppose I mistake someone saying anger means I'm angry with someone. Rather then myself.

*divine_punishment* · Nov 08, 2007, 07:56 PM

Another amazing poem from bratling!!!

The last stanza made me shiver. Amazing . . .

bratling · Nov 08, 2007, 09:11 PM

Wooo! ^_^ Thanks. I appriciate your compliments. Tee-hee. I like this one too.

Ichigo_06 · Nov 09, 2007, 09:37 AM

wow bratling that was an awsome poem. keep it up I agree with Astaroth but also with ray pain comes from anger and that poem has alot of hidden anger hurt, sadness, and feelings of uselessnesity (random word trying to lighten this thread a bit) and one thing I can tell you is that you need to smile!

big smile

that always lightens the mood and I felt this one to your feeling of uselessness is what I feel sometimes but if you give up now, you wont be able to fullfill your dreams. damn rambling me. lol anyways keep up the work Brat and remember that I am always there if you need someone to talk to, me and all your other friends, no fading for you. you wouldnt let me fade so I wont let you.

highteckdudu · Nov 09, 2007, 09:38 AM

ERASE YOU! never! YOur a very unforgetable person, I love the poem, keep up the work! I wish i had your talent!

Nov 08, 2007, 03:32 PM	#1 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Erase me. Erase me from time. Erase me from your memory. Just let me be nothing. I wish to unexist. Erase me from your heart. Erase me from your life. Just let me go. I'm toxic. Erase me from my family. Erase me from my friends. Replace me with something better. Something that won't end. Erase my unimportance. Erase my everything. Nothingness is what I want. To exist no more. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 562 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,396	Re: Erase me. Ooooh......full of strong emotions and feelings....mostly anger...........but I like it.....since it has spunk!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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Nov 08, 2007, 03:40 PM	#3 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Erase me. It's funny that you see anger. All I can see is pain. But maybe it's because I'm inside it. I guess I can see where you would find anger. It's how I tend to deal with it. I'm actually quite sad though. Not angry. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Erase me. Pain comes from anger too... this is depressing and it's like the ranting of a mind that gave up... nicely done.. ^^ keep it up... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Erase me. Mm. I suppose theres plenty of inward anger that must be apparent... I suppose I mistake someone saying anger means I'm angry with someone. Rather then myself. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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divine_punishment Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I? Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 22 Thanked 27 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 59,274	Re: Erase me. Another amazing poem from bratling!!! The last stanza made me shiver. Amazing . . . __________________ Bite Me!
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Nov 08, 2007, 09:11 PM	#7 (permalink)
bratling Devoted Otaku Join Date: May 2007 Location: Crystal Minnesota. Posts: 509 Thanks: 0 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 11,826	Re: Erase me. Wooo! ^_^ Thanks. I appriciate your compliments. Tee-hee. I like this one too. __________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.
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Nov 09, 2007, 09:37 AM	#8 (permalink)
Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,723	Re: Erase me. wow bratling that was an awsome poem. keep it up I agree with Astaroth but also with ray pain comes from anger and that poem has alot of hidden anger hurt, sadness, and feelings of uselessnesity (random word trying to lighten this thread a bit) and one thing I can tell you is that you need to smile! big smile that always lightens the mood and I felt this one to your feeling of uselessness is what I feel sometimes but if you give up now, you wont be able to fullfill your dreams. damn rambling me. lol anyways keep up the work Brat and remember that I am always there if you need someone to talk to, me and all your other friends, no fading for you. you wouldnt let me fade so I wont let you. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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highteckdudu Where the journey begins! Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: The wonderfull world of Minnesota! And I mean that! Posts: 595 Thanks: 3 Thanked 15 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 155,707	Re: Erase me. ERASE YOU! never! YOur a very unforgetable person, I love the poem, keep up the work! I wish i had your talent! __________________ I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass! Visit www.highteckdudu.webs.com!
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