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    Your memories are fagile as a vase.
    Your smile is as it was my own desire.

    Still you do not recognize me daily.
    Still you end up confused and altered.

    Why you do not remember me?
    Why is it that you do not see me?

    Am i invincible to you?
    Am i imperfect to your needs?

    Please do not get rid of me easily.
    Please forgive into keeping me together.

    Stay with me and i'll be happy.
    Stay the days that i truly need to be satisfied.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    aww... its so sweet and so sad at the same time... i love this poem~~
    the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,

    that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...

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    i appreciate your input from my poem and i hope it will gurantee you the best live ahead of you and i just simply had this poem but never posted it up before it took me time for me to simply post it and let everyone know how i feel to the person i dedicated and i wish to move on by letting go old memories to bring new memories that i will cherish in the future.

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    its really good because i sometimes feel this way about this person i know but that person never notices me so.. it makes me sad sometimes~ but in time i'll probably get over it~~
    dilly dally shilly shally so ffvii would say~~
    the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,

    that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...

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    Beautiful..very beautiful. I enjoyed this very much.
    Please write more?

    Living life on your own..Isn't always that easy..-Vincent

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    Quote Originally Posted by animefreak150 View Post
    its really good because i sometimes feel this way about this person i know but that person never notices me so.. it makes me sad sometimes~ but in time i'll probably get over it~~
    dilly dally shilly shally so ffvii would say~~
    well thats a good way to say it and on top of that there is more to come in your way as part of my share for this lovely community and i hope you get to enjoy my other brand new poems that are written by me and every month or week i get to input more poems that are good to me.
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    Beautiful..very beautiful. I enjoyed this very much.
    Please write more?
    well the only thing i can say is that there is more poems on the way but it takes a certain amount of time for me to post it up here in AO so yeah i will continue into writing more poems if your interested.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    yay!!! i will look forward to reading your new poems!!!
    the worst feeling is not Death, its knowing that you aren't needed,

    that you are alone in this world, and that you no longer have a reason to live...

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    Quote Originally Posted by animefreak150 View Post
    yay!!! i will look forward to reading your new poems!!!
    yep i will keep on writing more that is similar to the one i have written and also there may be some different meanings because thats what i like to do and i inted to pursue the poetic way and never lose this particular talent that i have.

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