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    Escaped The Drama

    You had to kill the last of it.
    Treat me as though I'm less than spit.
    Fill my head with much false hope.
    Every kiss.
    Every whisper.
    Every touch.
    Every grope.

    These wicked tears stream down my face.
    The last of my heart has gone to waste.
    Used as a cure for "Chantal withdrawal"
    Your lies
    Induced by
    Alcohol...

    My heart, my soul, my pride... all taken.
    Wish I could just sleep and never awaken.
    I wanted to please you. Do you know that I tried?
    But with me
    You're always
    So Unsatisfied.

    Does she make you happy, As you sit with her family?
    While your son walks around with a bear he calls "daddy"...
    Suppose its ok to cause soooo much trauma.
    As long
    As you've
    Escaped the drama.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Escaped The Drama

    Very nice poem it's a shame the daddy is with someone new and not with you and the kids. It's sad to know that so many kids are growing up without their dads to be there for them. Good job I look forward to reading more of your work.
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    Re: Escaped The Drama

    o.o What's Chantral Withrawal? ^^"
    I really like this one oo..
    The rhyming is only on certain points of the poem, but very nicely done!
    Hope to read more of your work

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    Re: Escaped The Drama

    Quote Originally Posted by elie26 View Post
    o.o What's Chantral Withrawal? ^^"
    I really like this one oo..
    The rhyming is only on certain points of the poem, but very nicely done!
    Hope to read more of your work

    Chantal is the name of the girl. He was having "withdrawals" because she left him... Heh... funny because even though she doesnt want him... he wants her. More than anyone (even his son). So he just sits underneath her, even though SHE has moved on. He was showing ME (the childs mother) affection, but not because he wanted ME back... but only to soothe the pain of losing her... In the end, she is STILL more impotant to him.

    Get it?
    If you do, help me out... I dont understand why this happened to me
    ... Not Ever Again...

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