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    Eternal Purpose

    I do have a purpose
    And it’s to love you,
    I'm really stomped
    Do you love me too?

    My purpose is fading
    My patience is dieing,
    I begin to question
    Do you love me too?

    "Why are you crying" you ask me
    "Because I'll soon have no purpose,
    If I don’t love you
    I'd feel so worthless."

    A kiss upon my cheek
    Our hands are hand and hand,
    My eternal purpose
    Is to love my man.
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    Re: Eternal Purpose

    Dying*

    "Our hands are hand and hand,"

    Sounds better as Our hands interlaced,

    But, I guess it's a rhyming poem. good work.
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    Re: Eternal Purpose

    love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good work i love the end

    "My eternal purpose
    Is to love my man."

    great !!!!!!!!!!!!
    poohs my boo

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    Re: Eternal Purpose

    great poem i LUV THA END gurl
    "My eternal purpose
    Is to love my man."
    GREAT!!!!!!!!
    Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon


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    Re: Eternal Purpose

    This poem is simple in structure and yet it does not deprive the reader to get its essence. i hope to read more of your poems. Good work! I enjoy reading it.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: Eternal Purpose

    Wow that was simply cute and the eternal purpose stuff is adorable, but i have age with Kasai on the ryming


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