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"Our hands are hand and hand,"
Sounds better as Our hands interlaced,
But, I guess it's a rhyming poem. good work.
I do have a purpose
And it’s to love you,
I'm really stomped
Do you love me too?
My purpose is fading
My patience is dieing,
I begin to question
Do you love me too?
"Why are you crying" you ask me
"Because I'll soon have no purpose,
If I don’t love you
I'd feel so worthless."
A kiss upon my cheek
Our hands are hand and hand,
My eternal purpose
Is to love my man.
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Dying*
"Our hands are hand and hand,"
Sounds better as Our hands interlaced,
But, I guess it's a rhyming poem. good work.
Seduced by Flesh
love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good work i love the end
"My eternal purpose
Is to love my man."
great!!!!!!!!!!!!
poohs my boo
great poem i LUV THA END gurl
"My eternal purpose
Is to love my man."
GREAT!!!!!!!!
Don't tell me the sky is the limit, when there are footprints on the moon
This poem is simple in structure and yet it does not deprive the reader to get its essence. i hope to read more of your poems. Good work! I enjoy reading it.
Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^
Wow that was simply cute and the eternal purpose stuff is adorable, but i have age with Kasai on the ryming
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