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    Eternal Scar

    As I walk to your grave
    When I saw it
    I wondered
    Was my love too late?

    I think this as I leave
    Never looking back
    As tears flow down my face
    I still thought of us

    Such painful memories
    But the worst part was
    Remembering you leaving me
    Then you leaving this world

    You never knowing
    How much I love you
    Is leaving an eternal scar
    On my heart....
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    Okay, in case anyone is wondering,
    This really happened to me
    So I decided to write a poem about it.

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    It is a good poem dark but very good and I'm sorry to hear about it happening to you. I hope that you are doing okay.

    Thanks to FLawed love the sig.

    Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    Neh, it happened a while ago so it's all good thank you for asking!

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    I like this poem quite well, because it tells about life and it tells about something that has never happened to me, so I found something new- new feelings in it ^^

    A nice work Freya and I'm sad to hear that has really happened to you...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    No no, really! I'm fine now! And thanks you both rock!

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    You may feel fine now but will you ever really be fine? You'll never forget it since it's happened to you.

    Thanks to FLawed love the sig.

    Pressure makes gems, Ease makes decay.

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    How sad really! I think it's very sad to me but I simply loved it indeed! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Eternal Scar

    my eyes are water no i got something in my eye a bug flew into my eye awwwww i give that brought one tear to my eye great poem you always have good work

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