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Reply With QuoteI have a feeling that I've read a poem that's like that but a different tone of it. oh well that's just me. anyways I love it! I could see why you were chosen of the best poet. =P
this is like my reality dream
music flowing through my ears
light's of hope washing all my bloody tears
reliving bresse giving a peacefull feeling
blue shining skies giving sensation
of love and happines
A shining start giving an eternal night
eternal mornings
giving enough peace to wash all the pain
no need for money, no need to pay
to have such a nice life with glorious day
an eternal view to see
the deep blue sea
green forest through all the planet
no contamination or desairs
to kill and destroy all that is natural and quiet
just what human being wishes to see
just eternal blue skies and true dreams
heaven just letting u in
like it were ur on home
ur on place to live
no bad things or commited sins
just a place for evryone to be
Last edited by Baal; Sep 07, 2006 at 05:29 PM.
perdoname michelle!
I have a feeling that I've read a poem that's like that but a different tone of it. oh well that's just me. anyways I love it! I could see why you were chosen of the best poet. =P
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
Spelling Baal. Spelling...
And yes, it does seem as if I've read the same words. I'm not saying that you didnt write it. I'd just like to see something of your own put into those words. You have the imagery down, but there's nothing special about what you wrote.
Seduced by Flesh
Good use of imagery, it allows the read to picture himself in quiet serene place!
"Look for the mischievous paw prints in the sand, and as they disappear into this earth torn land. Will they be true or stay forever blue? That's were this BlueFox will stand."
BlueFox1
Good one but the spelling...this one's like a song...
its cool i realy like it, very good imagry and it realy captures the feeling good one
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