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    Ethereal Abode

    And I am here in this eternal scaffold
    Prepared to relinquish this bolding mold
    Plunged into the ethereal abyys of impurity
    Intertwining abode lies in this realm of obscurity
    Hopelessly swayed in this winding distress

    "Creed"...I said vulgarly
    Bitterness flowed like wind in my mind
    Cold gust of wind touched my binding skin
    I am waiting in this eternal scaffold
    I am waiting for your sweet molding purity
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...

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    Re: Ethereal Abode

    Beautiful. You have really started to control your poetry and words. The length has improved greatly over the last couple of months. Good job on developing.

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