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    Ever Lusting Blaze

    We try to make things for best
    As we share this beat in our chest
    To keep our secret at our best
    Hoping for these secret sensational space to last...
    As our spatial entities converged each other...

    You'll serenade me with enchanting venoms
    Lay on my chest pf lingering flames
    Clasp my hands of imapling grasp
    abd love my heart with endless lust

    I'll kiss you lips your lips of unwithering blaze
    Hold your hips with frenzied chastity
    Clasp your hands of splendid cunning fiend
    and love your heart of eternal rage

    Our lips on the wineglass' rim
    and with the lights getting less dim
    I don't want to see the sunbeam
    For reality was sundered by our remorseless realm...

    Please...

    Don't wake me up in this ever lusting dream
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    A requiem for my beloved gf...
    As you know lust is one of the seven deadly sins..I don't quite know why I put it in here...
    But in these case I just put it...and even it mixes with my imaganation last night...
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: Ever Lusting Blaze

    Not to be rude, but what does this poem suppose to mean?

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    Re: Ever Lusting Blaze

    This is alright, but it seems like it is almost two different poems. Remember that there is no problem going short. The second line in the second stanza has an error that makes it hard to read.

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    Re: Ever Lusting Blaze

    This is alright, but it seems like it is almost two different poems. Remember that there is no problem going short. The second line in the second stanza has an error that makes it hard to read.
    Hmm...it seems I know what you meant beast..I didn't notice it until now...
    Not to be rude, but what does this poem suppose to mean?
    HEY! just like what I have said this isa tribue for my beloved gf!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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