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    RPG Lord and Master/Poet Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life may be famous one day Soldat of life's Avatar
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    Everchanging

    Everchanging

    Life does not hold still,
    Grasping it just slows it down.
    Tearing apart the sense of lonelyness,
    Fictive actions that lead to a solitary life.
    Yearning for an answer from the beyond,
    Reaching out desperately to what is there.

    Travel to the moon,
    The dream where you first appeared fades out.
    Where does my presence come into play,
    When will you notice that I truly exist.
    I do not play around with my life,
    Experiences is what comes above the rest.

    I'm here waiting for you,
    The one that will bring me back.
    Without any reason,
    while the light I longed for is dragged away.
    How can I describe what is within,
    Imitating only what I know in this endless sea of lives...



    Warning: a few of the lines were taken from an anime series so well...credits should be told, they come from NANA:

    Travel to the moon,
    The dream where you first appeared fades out.

    and

    I'm here waiting for you,
    The one that will bring me back.
    Without any reason,
    while the light I longed for is dragged away.


    I like so far the series, I suggest people who are open minded to watch, cause it's not as imature as it looks, quite the opposite really, just gotta watch closely.

    Nighty AO and well, that's that for now.

    Take Care and Till Next We Meet...
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    Re: Everchanging

    it was really nice man! it didnt quite rhyme, but the message was clear enough to understand.

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    Re: Everchanging

    I do not write to make it rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the feeling inside and its meaning that counts...well, that's what I consider poetry, not things that constraint imagination/inspiration to do things always the same way, HMPH!!!

    tired so bed now...reallly :P

    EDIT: Oh and thanks for the comment, XD
    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by Soldat of life
    I do not write to make it rhyme!!!!!!!!!!!! It's the feeling inside and its meaning that counts...well, that's what I consider poetry, not things that constraint imagination/inspiration to do things always the same way, HMPH!!!

    tired so bed now...reallly :P

    EDIT: Oh and thanks for the comment, XD
    lol i know! free verse poems (kinda like thoughts), yourwelcome man, have a good night

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    whoa...so much emotion...great job...it was very sad, tho...

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