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    Re: The Everlasting Flower

    lol yea i know it's kinda confusing but i cant take all the credit for the first part of the poem once again i have to give credit to a guy who liked me last year and he wrote for me...part 2 i made up on the spot
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: The Everlasting Flower

    Indeed, quite a nice poem, I enjoyed reading this, though in some places it was a bit confusing... I love the way you're comparing it all to a flower, to the life of a flower... it's kind of nice...

    I'll be looking forward for more anyways ^^ always nice to see something new...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: The Everlasting Flower

    I have another poem but I dont have a title for it and i already have a untitled as one of my titles so i have to think of a title first before i post it lol hopefully everybody can wait that long? if not it's ok ill just post it when i finish writing it lol...i kinda just stormed it up this morning walk to skool lol
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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    Re: The Everlasting Flower

    I liked this one ^^
    It was sensual. And I tought it made sense, in its own way. Or maybe it didnt have to. It almost felt like the description of passion. When you use the image of a rose, dying for someones love.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: The Everlasting Flower

    lol thank u very much yes a dying flower to express his love me...seems kinda romantic thank u very much
    I wish a life of a love of a life. Send a light to through the darkest of nights. Let a kiss fly from the heart. Love me like you loved me in our past lives. Send this pain back to me these cold lonely nights. Haunt all my fanasties leave all my dreams shadow yourself once again into me....

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