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    Everyday


    You see me everyday
    And you always got something to say
    Good or bad
    It doesn’t matter to you
    You just need to have it your way
    No matter what I do
    I will see you ever day
    Not because I want to
    Cuz your there
    You see me everyday
    But you never did care
    To see the real me


    *Sigh* I had a bad day, hope you like it, one of my first poems I made up about my feelings.
    Last edited by fma1012; Oct 18, 2006 at 07:41 PM.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: Everyday

    Very cute I hope your not still sad bout what happened earlier lol...

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    Re: Everyday

    Nice poem. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: Everyday

    Nice poem. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.

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    Re: Everyday

    nice sister! its awesomem ^_^ though you could make it longer ^.^


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    Violent: thanks I do feel better, all I have to do is wait till tomorrow sigh

    CherryBlossom18: thanks more of my work ^^; I'm really bad lol but I will try

    RCP: thanks sis and yea it could have been longer, but I was mad that time so wasn't thinking rly.


    Thanks lifeforce! (:

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    Re: Everyday

    Well, the first and second line are so cliche in a poem.. Try to create some sort of imagery.
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    Re: Everyday

    the poem said you want to know that person closer..
    hmm...
    what a hard time you got.
    i hope the difficulties that make you and him/her is solved ASAP. (^_^)

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