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    Everyone gave up on me.

    "Everyone gave up on me"
    Not much I could do.
    What can I do when im all alone.
    Its hard to move on when your souls getting ripped apart, torn to sheds.
    Lucky I aint dead.
    breathe coming in like its welcome,
    wished for that shadow of death to come quickly.
    You must think im crazy.
    But im just confuzed, dazed, looking at the world from a different point.
    Seeing how everyone has to go by someone elses way, I've got a clearer view of the world and all of its surroundings.
    Sometime's I look at it the way it used to be and how it is now, nothing's the same anymore.
    it seems everyone has changed.
    not for the better, but for the worse.

    Live journal feed....
    "i ain't perfect, i have flaws.
    but the one thing that flaw ain't gon'
    be is me bein' fake. "

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    Very good Huike, I hope you really don't feel this way, and if you wanna be friends just let me know, ok^^

    Clan Rainstorm 5th in command

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    You know what?
    Im wondering why is everyone so happy on these kind of forums, always asking to be friends.
    And being them so easily too. how can this be? I barley even know you or anyone on this site. shit that's annoying.
    So if your still wondering no.
    And sorry if im such a jackass, but that's just me.
    Last edited by Huike; Jul 12, 2008 at 08:08 PM.
    "i ain't perfect, i have flaws.
    but the one thing that flaw ain't gon'
    be is me bein' fake. "

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Huike View Post
    You know what?
    Im wondering why is everyone so happy on these kind of forums, alway's asking to be friend's.
    And being them so easily too. how can this be? I barley even know you or anyone on this site. shit that's annoying.
    So if your still wondering no.
    And sorry if im such a jackass, but that's just me.
    No, it's alright. And not everyone on these forums are happy. It's rare to find me truely happy. You say that you barely know me but yet you are already judging me by saying that I'm a happy go lucky person. No offense but If you don't care for friends then why even join forums! >.<

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    I ..dont know why I join these forums.
    Just shut up already
    "i ain't perfect, i have flaws.
    but the one thing that flaw ain't gon'
    be is me bein' fake. "

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Huike View Post
    I ..dont know why I join these forums.
    Just shut up already
    Fine I'll shut up, but I do have one last thing to say. Your avatar really suits your attitude since you act just like Tsukasa

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    Your annoying.
    Were off track..so back to the poem, your comment is noted.
    "i ain't perfect, i have flaws.
    but the one thing that flaw ain't gon'
    be is me bein' fake. "

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    Re: Everyone gave up on me.

    one thing i would like to is thank u for not doing a happy poem
    (they tick me off) and two ur poem is very good i like it with a hint of love
    i give it a 8 out of 10.......it kind of makes me feel all warm inside.......

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