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  1. Jun 23, 2007 04:31 AM #1
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    I wrote this, inspired after chatting with a friend. He made me realize how much he and my friends mean to me. Hope you enjoy. It isn't a complicated piece, just something I wrote to show how much I love my friends. <3

    Everything

    The winds of destiny
    It ruffles the leaves
    It changes our lives

    A flower spreading out
    A petal withering down
    Pulls of gravity and nature

    The sky seemed blue
    The earth seemed green
    Life is present in everything

    My vines were once broken
    My voice was once lost
    But you gave life to all

    See, I’m happy now
    You’ve made a difference
    By just being there

    You’re a friend
    Simple as it seems
    It meant everything
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  2. Jun 23, 2007 05:43 AM #2
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    Re: Everything

    @.@ woah... subarashi (great) nice poem there elie.. ^^ i felt the same for my friends... ^^,

    Sweet, simple and short.. ^^ nice
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  3. Jun 23, 2007 01:23 PM #3
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    Great poem indeed!!!! Really! I like how you talked about how much you care for your friends! so YEAH!!! I do care the same way as you say in this poem so yeah! I just loved it so I hope to see more!
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  4. Jun 23, 2007 07:55 PM #4
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    >_< I didn't thought much of it myself tho.. Thx anyways guys ^^
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    Re: Everything

    A great poem, I really like this one!!! ^^ it's great- the way you describe all those things is wonderful and makes me forget myself and the meaning- you telling someone that he/she has changed your life like that is wonderful also...

    I hope to see more of your works Elie! ^^

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    A great poem, I really like this one!!! ^^ it's great- the way you describe all those things is wonderful and makes me forget myself and the meaning- you telling someone that he/she has changed your life like that is wonderful also...

    I hope to see more of your works Elie! ^^
    Thank you I just really wanted to express my feeling of "thanks" to my fellow friends that've been great to me. I honestly love them to bits =P
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  7. Jun 24, 2007 12:44 PM #7
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    Re: Everything

    its good how much u care about ur friends maybe thats why u wrote this very strong words good job
    Yeah, Bye.
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    Re: Everything

    its short and to the point.

    i like it!

    nice poem there elie, friend are always something we shouldn't take for granted.

    good job putting into a poem. nice stuff.
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