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    Everything Is A Pilgrim

    We like days must keep moving forward.
    For better or worse on we must go.
    You sense life’s wave is coming toward.

    Where we end up only God will know.
    Traversing over people and land.
    Like a sail, time takes us where winds blow.

    From rainforests to oceans of sand.
    Sure I have had poignant moments and much fun.
    Sometimes I have been dealt a hard hand.

    We are all pilgrims but some walk and some run.
    That is my fate and I share it with many.
    This is the same with all creatures under sun.

    And if Gaia theory holds true,
    Earth in space is a pilgrim too.
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    Wrote this riding the same sugar buzz as I did whe n I wrote colors of earth.  This one utilizes the  terza rima style put to sonnett form.  The form is  a terza rima with a couplet at the conclusi on.  

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    Re: Everything Is A Pilgrim

    Everything must take it's course, right? At least it makes for great sight seeing, huh?

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    Re: Everything Is A Pilgrim

    Yes everybody is a Pilgrim...
    and everyone came from a Pilgrim forefather........
    But a great poem^^
    Nice work beast..^^
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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