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Reply With QuoteO.O wow, brother i never knew u were a poet! i felt the feelings and emotions in the poem. it was very nice
I love you no matter what
I will always be there for you
I think your the best thing to happen to me
Your my one and only we will never be apart
These lies i have always trusted them
These feelings they have always kept you safe
That smile it always made my heart melt
Your touch it made me feel so woderfull
My heart it's nothing but a shell
My love it has turned hope in to desperation
My smile it could kill you with a bend of my lips in an angry moment
Your life it sickens me now that i know you
The pain you will never no my pain and how the
world looks ugly from these eye's of hatred you made.
Trust how did i ever do this knowing you were just a lie
in a world i thought was truth.
Anguish this is what i feel along with the pain you
weild never more will i use love for myself.
Gone these moments are that i had and i wish they
never happend becuase all they do is make my life living hell.
ok this is another poem i did im still having problem near the
end with makeing the sentences shorter . any help or comment would
be apreciated so i could work on this problem
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
O.O wow, brother i never knew u were a poet! i felt the feelings and emotions in the poem. it was very nice
you are a poet...........ahhahahahah..................but good poem..........and a trick if you want to make the sentences shorter...........use more sentences........i do it all the time.............can you tell..............
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ok cool i will try that oh yea mage i have another poem thats pretty good somethink it is anyway check it out and tell me what you think its called tears of pain
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
very good poem Chris....keep up the good work
thank u SasuraiHell
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very good holder.. Yeah, i really think that you should make the last verse shorter. But keep it up!
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I think it's awesome.I loved it.I could feel ever emotion form the poem.It was just wonderful.Great job,no wait...Awesome job lol
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yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! chris is a poet!!!!!!!!!!1
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