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    Post The Evil Garden Gnome

    A promise of revenge, whispers in soft gnomes breath.
    For once a touch brought fortune, now brings only death.
    They extinguish with no mercy, shame or remorse.
    But they are not to blame, for they see no other course.
    Becarful when approaching, Bewary of your death.
    Because this aint nothin personal,
    It is only The Gnomes Test.

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    Re: The Evil Garden Gnome

    cool poem but a bit short sort of like a fantasy
    with a plot i like it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Evil Garden Gnome

    Would you kick a lawn gnome??
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: The Evil Garden Gnome

    XD nice one there. short but awesome, keep going ^_^ try making ur poems longer a lil. i like the thought though


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