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    Evil Mind

    The anger builds
    The emotions flow chaoticly
    Danger is stirring
    kids are singing
    through this mental state I remain lost
    I remain dark
    Footsteps echo through my mind
    Causing a stir
    or may even chaos
    Screams fill my mind
    The Pain!
    The Pain!
    The Pain!!!

    Darkness consumes my mind
    Death fills my conscience
    Murder seems to be a joy
    Genocide seems to be a journey
    Halocaust is what's inevitable
    My skull is thick with the sound of unimaginable pain
    My mind is drowned in the tears of the ones I have murdered.
    This is my comfort
    This is my Life
    This is my mission

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    Re: Evil Mind

    Is this poem about whats going to happen after the presidential election is over?... lmao.

    Naw, but seriously... I liked this. Its dark, but I feel its a reality. It is a reality most people choose to ignore, becuase no one likes to think about the darkness of the world. I however find it is best to know darkness, and embrace it. And maybe, it'll spare me. Either that, or I'll become consumed. And, it'll be that happy, shiney world that will really disturb me. In fact... it already is pretty scary how people like to pretend.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Evil Mind

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Is this poem about whats going to happen after the presidential election is over?... lmao.

    Naw, but seriously... I liked this. Its dark, but I feel its a reality. It is a reality most people choose to ignore, becuase no one likes to think about the darkness of the world. I however find it is best to know darkness, and embrace it. And maybe, it'll spare me. Either that, or I'll become consumed. And, it'll be that happy, shiney world that will really disturb me. In fact... it already is pretty scary how people like to pretend.
    I have to agree with you. If you don't allow yourself to notice the darkness in the world and within yourself, you can't completely say that you know yourself as a whole. Expressing this dark side of me helps me not only notice the darkness within, but it also lets me release some of it's fury in a more constructive fashion.

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    Re: Evil Mind

    Wow this was great..
    Really loved your poem...
    But it's true...
    Everyone has darkness within them...
    Only they wont accept it and try to hide or run away from it...
    I think if you dont accept it or like that you wont be complete...
    When they think that they will be complete if they hide the darkness...
    I dont think that's the solution of it...
    It's difficult to embrace the darkness within yourself...
    I have done that and I found myself more peaceful...
    Just as some say:
    Darkness can't live without Light...
    But Light can't live without Darkness...

    Bye Bye..^_^
    We are affraid of losing controle...But why should you be affraid of losing it...While you didnt have it...

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