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Reply With QuoteIm a bit confused by all the bubbles, but i still like it its well written *nod nod*
Me...
You don't seem to understand
Can you not see the big picture I am painting..?
The image of a distorted reality
A life of a being, which is me
Soft as flesh itself
Real as death himself
Harder to comprehend than trying to get FEMA's help
In my world it is so diverse
In my world everything is reverse
Live is backwards for evil; so why not just evil,
until you experienced it all & devil
Do you not find me interesting..?
or am I nothing but trouble..?
My mind isn't stable & can burst any minute;
that's why I call it "Bubbles"...
My "Bubbles" loves to blossom just like buttercups
Can you handle my "Bubble's" powerpuff thoughts..?
Are you sold on your vain thinking & already been bought...?
Can you evil in my "Bubbles" & fight battles that has not yet been fought..?
Do you hate my "Bubbles" & wish it will just pop..?
Have you been trained by your thoughts...?
Can you find your way through my "Bubble's" foggy, murky thinking without getting lost...?
Will you drown in my "Bubble's" "deep swamps"..?
my "Bubbles" call "deep thoughts"
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
Im a bit confused by all the bubbles, but i still like it its well written *nod nod*
Is this about the Powerpuff Girl?
Tano-kun (Aug 14, 2008)
I can definately live with your mind.
Ha! You can't stump me homie!!!!
This was definately interesting.... creative... I got to be honest, I don't think most people would get it.
... Not Ever Again...
Peach.... You are the BEST!!! I wrote this poem to see who could contemplate my way of thought... Something told me if it was anyone it would be you...Originally Posted by Peach_follows
You maybe right many people might not get it & that is the main reason why I wrote it the way I did... Just to see whose mind can rise or sink to my level...
*I guess I will help anyone who really don't get what was written... Just switch evil' w/ < live >, devil w/ < lived >, & replace my "Bubbles" with my "mind"... Get it now..? "everything in my mind is reverse" / "my mind isn't stable & can burst"; "that's why I call it Bubbles"...
If anyone has any more questions or problems about what was written feel free to ask... I will try my best to show you a glimpse into my mind.. lol, but THANK YOU Peach for not being mislead of what was written & seeing the "big picture I was painting"... You are one of the main reasons why I still post my writings on here... ^_^
The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!
Re: Evil' With My Bubbles... <Get it..? U may never understand me then> Thanks for reminding me about that. This poem probably is about powerpuff girls. I thought it sounded somewhat familiar. I don't really get it, but I guess it's unique
lol i like the whole bubble comparson when it comes to the frailty of
life liek you said and when people come into you life it makes your bubble either pop or get bigger or it want do anything but be anoying
either way thats what i got from this i liked it.
very awesome poem.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
It's different from other poems I've read so that's a plus. I not really sure what to say with talking about comparing bubbles to things that break easily.
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