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    Examination of Logic;, User Friendly

    A poem to please,
    to make the hand seize;
    however, delicious
    cleverly vicious.

    My beautiful viewer
    countless or fewer,
    imagine I'm sincere;
    there is no "poem" here.

    /the above is not what you came to see but I was afraid this would get deleted as there is nothing even faintly resembling a poem in what I want to share.

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    Honestly, this isn't a fanfic, if it were in that category no one would see it in the first place. i want to share

    eDit: it looks much better with the indentation etc.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Examination of Logic;, User Friendly

    Wow, has a lot of depth to it, Im guessing I read this piece of writing over 3 or 4 times and still having a difficult time grasping it all. Seems to have much thought behind it, good job!

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    Re: Examination of Logic;, User Friendly

    Very post modern esque writing style. I have seen this from Canadian writers before. If the goal is to create bautiful sentences you did a hell of a job, much better than anyone else might I add. Only real criticism is that it went a bit long. I sensed a running out of energy, maybe wait between these pieces and then a few days later put them together.

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    Re: Examination of Logic;, User Friendly

    huuuuuh. I'm so surprised that you figured out my problem without even knowing the question beast. Quite a bit of my favorite words show up when I'm all high and toasty, and when people hear this they assume that I'm using "creative steroids."

    The ideas are always there, except they're being childish about things and hiding. In any case, I burned out before this was finished~

    And thank you, thank you! Your kind sentiments make sharing so worth it.
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