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    Hopefully this makes sense....
    Meh sorry it was one of my old poems I felt like posting here.
    Right after my depression period I wrote this to my boyfriend.
    He loved it so I hope you all do too.

    December 27, 2005
    _______

    Take me all the way tonight
    take me to the never ending light

    Bring me forth to that wondrous place
    but leave me be if its a waste

    Expand my sights and open your mind
    I want to see what I can find

    Flying deep inside your thoughts
    I really found things I could've fought

    Seeing flames of pain ignite
    you can't give up without a fight

    Never thought of you as weak
    and looking at you, you're what I seek


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    I really do love it!!! It's wonderful, you've really done a great work here!! It's just great- it seems so... strong in so many ways- strong love and strong you...

    Really a wonderful work, I really enjoyed reading this!!! And post more, I'm sure I'm not the only one who'd like to see your other poems, no matter how old they are. lol

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    *BOW* how this love strong and wonderful ...
    I love read it ..It's a great poem ..nice work ..
    keep it up ...in strong Love..

    Foolish beating

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    Lol ya.....thank you guys
    I appreciate the nice comments....really I do.
    So thank you for reviewing my poem...and who knows maybe I'll post more? xD


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