Hopefully this makes sense....
Meh sorry it was one of my old poems I felt like posting here.
Right after my depression period I wrote this to my boyfriend.
He loved it so I hope you all do too.
December 27, 2005
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Take me all the way tonight
take me to the never ending light
Bring me forth to that wondrous place
but leave me be if its a waste
Expand my sights and open your mind
I want to see what I can find
Flying deep inside your thoughts
I really found things I could've fought
Seeing flames of pain ignite
you can't give up without a fight
Never thought of you as weak
and looking at you, you're what I seek
I really do love it!!! It's wonderful, you've really done a great work here!! It's just great- it seems so... strong in so many ways- strong love and strong you...
Really a wonderful work, I really enjoyed reading this!!! And post more, I'm sure I'm not the only one who'd like to see your other poems, no matter how old they are. lol
*BOW* how this love strong and wonderful ...
I love read it ..It's a great poem ..nice work ..
keep it up ...in strong Love..
Foolish beating
Lol ya.....thank you guys
I appreciate the nice comments....really I do.
So thank you for reviewing my poem...and who knows maybe I'll post more? xD
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