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You Jump Up High, But You Fall Down Low,
You Are What You Are, Don't Go With The Flow,
Feeling Alone In The Freezing Cold Rain,
All The Memories In Your Head Will Drive You Insane,
You Know Your More Than Just Skin And Bone,
Your Heart Comes To Life When With Them But Dies When Your Alone,
If Life Was So Simple, Just An Ordinary Task,
But I Feel So Ashamed, I Hide Behind A Mask.
Explaining The Unexplainable.
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Don't force the rhyme. Overall, this was a very nice poem. I approve. :2thumbs:
I really liked this poem
one line in particular stands out to me
"All The Memories In Your Head Will Drive You Insane"
makes me think/feel it should have it's own poem
but it's good!
glad both of you liked my poem^_^
yay!! I'm a weird lol
Hmm, couldn't exactly get the flow of the poem and don't stress too much on the rhyming, okay? :)
hey rave,
I don't stress with my rhyming I just write them down,
if it rhymes then if not it's still cool.
I write what I want simple as that:)
lol no way.. :lol2: u take it so lightly... though it does seem u have been trying hard on rhyming it xD
and yet again the town is... hold on.. let me try again
and yet again flaminghate once again made a good poem :laugh:
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yeah I know I take my rhyming lightly but hey its my poems not yours:D
but if people take me lightly when they fight me >=) I hope they have a good doctor:D