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    expressing

    Everyone tells you,
    be yourself.
    have you ever wondered
    how to do that well?


    I'm just asking
    for if you know.
    should you believe and stay,
    or should you go?


    Wondering why i cannot force myself
    to show the expressions
    of a teenage girl.
    The tears i shed might be true,
    Who knows i might like you?

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    expressing my feelings at points of time can be hard.comments are welcomed.♥~*The Princess*~♥
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    Re: expressing

    A very well written poem, Almost brought a tear to my eye. . .

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    Re: expressing

    Short, sweet, and to the point. Very well done and many possibly might relate to this. Good job.

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    ^^thank you both.yes i just wrote it out of thin air.though its true i have a hard time sometimes expressing my feelings ^^thanks again shadwo & chaos!!!!!
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: expressing

    I like it.
    it had emotions and good body and all that jazz.lol.
    but yea it was good.
    I like it lots.
    Hope to seee more!!^.^

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    Re: expressing

    That was a great poem nina, "Everyone tells you,be yourself. have you ever wondered how to do that well?" That part of the poem really gets to me and what I wonder about as well, I can truly understand what you were feeling and expressing in this poem keep up the good work and can't wait to hear more!

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    thank you both tora and p.r.princess thnx alot for your comments^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: expressing

    very well written poem! So sad and I could deffinatly relate to it! Good job hope to see more!^^



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