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    If you look deep inside me you will find love
    If you look outside of me you'll find destruction.

    During my years of worryness I loosen my crown
    During the time spent in a far away crowded town.

    Places to see you will find appeasement
    Places to go will get you pacifying the coast.

    I appreciate the time taken to clear up thoughts
    I am grateful that everything is visual that make up everything.
    Last edited by dark1angel; Oct 14, 2008 at 01:41 PM.

    Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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    Re: Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by dark1angel View Post
    If you lok deep onsode me you will find love
    If you look outside of me you'll find destruction.

    During my years of worryness I loosen my crown
    During the time spent in a far away crowded town.

    Places to see you will find appeasement
    Places to go will get you pacifying the coast.

    I ppreciate the time taken to clear up thoughts
    I am grateful that everything is visual that make up everything.
    it is very good and all but you misspelled some words please fix them thank you
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: Eyes

    oh yeah i did mispelled some words but is only small ones nothing big though if it is a deal then i will correct it. At any rate please reassure me when everything else is correctly fine.

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    Re: Eyes

    Oh, wow. I loved this poem so much! The part that really stood out to me was:
    If you lok deep onsode me you will find love
    If you look outside of me you'll find destruction.
    I don't know why, but I do think this was the most powerful and reflective part! At least, to me it was. I do hope to see more from you in the future! ^^



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    Re: Eyes

    Quote Originally Posted by Akura13 View Post
    Oh, wow. I loved this poem so much! The part that really stood out to me was:
    I don't know why, but I do think this was the most powerful and reflective part! At least, to me it was. I do hope to see more from you in the future! ^^
    well it took me some serious work effort into clearing up negative thoughts into a positive image from many ideas that travel around in my daily mind.

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