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    Eyes that Lies

    Open up your eyes, gaze into her heart of ice
    What do you see? If not what is behind her mind?
    Her hair covers her by the wind.
    Just like the strong protecting the weak
    If thou think thou can find,
    She will not even let you speak.

    Deep into her eyes of darkness,
    All adore her light; all your eyes are on her.
    Why do you look at that girl? If not her loving kindness?
    She looks away once again
    Just like hiding those teary eyes
    So if thou saw her slow moving tears,
    She will disappear along with her fears.

    Countless stars she view above, too many eyes watches her below.
    Ever wonder how lonely she is? If not the attention she gets?
    The girl smiles when she’s all-alone, the eye slowly become stone.
    Can you hear her screams and cries like she hears yours?
    At least take a look into her eyes of sorrow. Has she ever looked at you in the eyes hollowly? She seems to be on a flow.
    Drifting along the shadows, is she watching you through the windows?
    Everyone knows she’s in existence; she feels she’s been sentence.
    What you thought you see in her is what she is not because everything has been taken. The truth reflects in her eyes, words become unspoken.

    Once again she looks away,
    Leaving her hair covering her sway.
    One last unspoken word mutters across her lips,
    There is no other way,
    She walks while you are stun.
    From far apart, all anyone can do is watch her from behind.
    So close your eyes and let her go.


    “Eyes that lies”
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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    Deep into her eyes of darkness,
    All adore her light; all your eyes are on her.
    Honestly it was a little difficult keeping up with the poem towards the beginning. However, you have a very unique technique going for you.... the first I've seen on AO, yet O.o

    It took me a short while to come up with my own personal interpretation, but here it is : An individual who hides her suffering in life/society. One that doesn't fully express her emotions to the world, she smiles but its like she's not smiling at all. Ohhh... I can definitely relate to this piece. ^_^

    A lovely poem, nonetheless. Keep writing Aya-kun... I'll be sure to leave comments on all.

    P.S : Eh? .... Where's the EMO feeling women!!!? @_@

    *Pokes Sheepy's eyes* Let the blood flow!!! LOL. jk
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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    Wow that is really long and good, so did this poem come to you or someone helped you write a poem?

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    i like this poem alot it explains
    the empty void some feel and the hollow
    smile that you give most people wouldnt
    understand this. this is what i get from
    the poem . great peoam aya-kun cant wait
    to read another
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    *claps* that was awesome aya-kun, keep it up and you'll become a great poet.

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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    Quote Originally Posted by Aya-kun
    just a pathetic poem i did while crying. ::end::
    WHAT!!!!!!

    YOU WERE CRYING!!!!!!!

    here you can pm me and you can talk o.k

    I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.

    A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
    http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm

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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    Awww omg that was beautiful!!! *tear* Keep up the work girl
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    Re: Eyes that Lies

    thats beautiful.
    keep up the great work.

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