Honestly it was a little difficult keeping up with the poem towards the beginning. However, you have a very unique technique going for you.... the first I've seen on AO, yet O.oDeep into her eyes of darkness,
All adore her light; all your eyes are on her.
It took me a short while to come up with my own personal interpretation, but here it is : An individual who hides her suffering in life/society. One that doesn't fully express her emotions to the world, she smiles but its like she's not smiling at all. Ohhh... I can definitely relate to this piece. ^_^
A lovely poem, nonetheless. Keep writing Aya-kun... I'll be sure to leave comments on all.
P.S : Eh? .... Where's the EMO feeling women!!!? @_@
*Pokes Sheepy's eyes* Let the blood flow!!! LOL. jk