Eyes that Lies

**Aya-kun** · Jun 24, 2006 07:37 AM

Open up your eyes, gaze into her heart of ice
What do you see? If not what is behind her mind?
Her hair covers her by the wind.
Just like the strong protecting the weak
If thou think thou can find,
She will not even let you speak.

Deep into her eyes of darkness,
All adore her light; all your eyes are on her.
Why do you look at that girl? If not her loving kindness?
She looks away once again
Just like hiding those teary eyes
So if thou saw her slow moving tears,
She will disappear along with her fears.

Countless stars she view above, too many eyes watches her below.
Ever wonder how lonely she is? If not the attention she gets?
The girl smiles when she’s all-alone, the eye slowly become stone.
Can you hear her screams and cries like she hears yours?
At least take a look into her eyes of sorrow. Has she ever looked at you in the eyes hollowly? She seems to be on a flow.
Drifting along the shadows, is she watching you through the windows?
Everyone knows she’s in existence; she feels she’s been sentence.
What you thought you see in her is what she is not because everything has been taken. The truth reflects in her eyes, words become unspoken.

Once again she looks away,
Leaving her hair covering her sway.
One last unspoken word mutters across her lips,
There is no other way,
She walks while you are stun.
From far apart, all anyone can do is watch her from behind.
So close your eyes and let her go.

“Eyes that lies”

**Reese** · Jun 24, 2006 07:18 PM

Deep into her eyes of darkness,
All adore her light; all your eyes are on her.

Honestly it was a little difficult keeping up with the poem towards the beginning.

However, you have a very unique technique going for you.... the first I've seen on AO, yet O.o

It took me a short while to come up with my own personal interpretation, but here it is : An individual who hides her suffering in life/society. One that doesn't fully express her emotions to the world, she smiles but its like she's not smiling at all. Ohhh... I can definitely relate to this piece. ^_^

A lovely poem, nonetheless. Keep writing Aya-kun... I'll be sure to leave comments on all.

P.S : Eh? .... Where's the EMO feeling women!!!? @_@

*Pokes Sheepy's eyes* Let the blood flow!!! LOL. jk

**sora the king of dreams** · Jun 25, 2006 02:32 AM

Wow that is really long and good, so did this poem come to you or someone helped you write a poem?

***HolderOfTheDarkChalice*** · Jun 25, 2006 02:38 AM

i like this poem alot it explains
the empty void some feel and the hollow
smile that you give most people wouldnt
understand this. this is what i get from
the poem . great peoam aya-kun cant wait
to read another

**ketaro** · Jun 25, 2006 08:14 AM

*claps* that was awesome aya-kun, keep it up and you'll become a great poet.

**sora the king of dreams** · Jun 25, 2006 03:17 PM

Originally Posted by Aya-kun

just a pathetic poem i did while crying. ::end::

WHAT!!!!!!

YOU WERE CRYING!!!!!!!

here you can pm me and you can talk o.k

**HieisLove** · Jun 25, 2006 06:59 PM

Awww omg that was beautiful!!! *tear* Keep up the work girl

**setsuna mudo1617** · Jun 26, 2006 05:16 AM

thats beautiful.
keep up the great work.

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