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    In the eyes of Love & Hate

    Love is like a butterfly
    hate is like a bee
    put them both together
    it will be something to see

    In the eyes of Love & Hate
    there is nothing but fate
    you better find someone
    before it's too late

    In the eyes of Love & Hate
    there is nothing to explain
    nothing but the pain
    that makes you go insane

    In the eyes of Love & Hate
    nothing is the same
    all you have to do
    is to throw away all the shame
    for the person that came

    In the eyes of Love & Hate
    I wont advertise anymore just please quit harrassing me!

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    very touching!!!! keep up the great work


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    nice poem, keep it up ok.

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    Horrorfact, you got yourself a wonderful poem! your description of love and hate, captured my interest.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    Woah!! Oh I totally like it!!!
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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    I loved it overall, I have to say

    The only thing was the first stanza....it didn't really made much sense...and I didn't like the descriptive with butterfly and bee....no offence...I'm giving constructive critisim ^^;;; Nice work ^^

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    thanks everyone that is so nice!!!
    I wont advertise anymore just please quit harrassing me!

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    Re: In the eyes of Love & Hate

    i really like it! its a great poem- keep it up and i hope to read more!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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