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    Eyes ( a poem that mightmake you think)

    People say you see emotion in ones eyes,
    Loneliness, hatred, despair, and surprise.

    If you are alone your eyes are deep and empty,
    and they long for what could be.

    If they are filled with hatred they are black and bleak,
    and with every blink they gleam an evil streak.

    If they hold despair,
    they solitarily stare,
    at the world around them,
    and think why is life unfair.

    Yet if surprise is present,
    They are bright and pleasant.

    I bet you wonder what my eyes hold,
    they are not black, or bleak, or dark, or cold,
    its love that is shown ,
    they are warm and not alone,
    and sparkle with a happy glint,
    a sweet, hyper, sparky tint.

    People say you see loneliness, hatred, despair, and surprise,
    what emotion hides deep with inside your eyes?

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    Re: Eyes ( a poem that mightmake you think)

    Well.. this poem is pretty self explanitory, didn't strike me as, extraordinary, or anything special. perhaps if you gave it more of an atmosphere of some sort, it's like reading a medical book. Just the facts, no feeling.
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    Re: Eyes ( a poem that mightmake you think)

    Strage because people seem to have forgotten that they shouldn't jugde a book by its cover.A person's eyes are just another cover.Don't be fool by just looks.Because that is not everything there is to see and be hold.There is much more to a person then just their looks all though we all don't use a little time to look deeper into a person.
    People only heard and see what they want and the rest of the truth is on them.
    Perfection is dull

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