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    Fabricated

    With you, I'm intoxicated.
    But this is fabricated.
    See, in my mind, I've made this.
    So I cannot let it be.

    There's no magic elixer,
    for this dramatic mixture.
    So, please don't paint a picture
    of what you want me to see.

    Let me embrace your flaws.
    Sex protected, love is raw.
    Frozen hearts can be flawed,
    if you let me set you free.

    But there is no gradification,
    if we can't make a seperation,
    between reality and a fabrication.
    Which one are you to me?
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Fabricated

    Gradification is a word? Very cool. Nice wording and it kept a nice flow.
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    Re: Fabricated

    WOW! very good rhyming. very hard words too. i like it.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: Fabricated

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Gradification is a word? Very cool. Nice wording and it kept a nice flow.
    No. its not... the word is gratification... and I just thought I knew how to spell it, and didn't bother checking. I was wrong....

    Not my first spelling error and wont be my last. But thanx for trying to keep me on my toes.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Fabricated

    Awesome poem! The use of words in this poem keeps the flow steady, and it makes the reader think! Awesome job!

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