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Aug 27, 2007, 11:30 AM
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 | faceless In the night my heart wanders trying to find...her the one without a face When i dream.. I see her telling me that i deserve better a happy home. a good life. a second chance.. I was blessed with a loving family but was also cursed by loneliness..an emptiness I could not fulfill alone... And when i cried out to understand... she vanished without a trace ...still remembering... I still do not know this faceless woman... but wheni think of how i could be..different of how my life could've changed.... NO. I blame the faceless woman who chose my destiny no questions asked, without my concern It was HER fault not I And when it all comes down to it she wil REMAIN faceless to me
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Aug 27, 2007, 11:58 AM
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| Re: faceless nice poem blackrose92  but it seems a little sad to  Quote:
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Aug 27, 2007, 12:15 PM
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| Re: faceless I like the way this poem was written^^ It's a GREAT poem and i like it a lot^^ In my opinion you have always written good poems, even though i haven't gotten around to reading them all lol... but i may not be on here for a while... so i thought i would let you know that... ^^ Continue to write them wonderfully^_^ |
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Aug 27, 2007, 12:16 PM
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| Re: faceless aww^^ thank you both for the feedback i really appreciated it YAY^^
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Aug 28, 2007, 07:16 AM
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| Re: faceless woah...this is much better than last times..  Hmm...faceless huh...a good way of saying u want to rid her of ur memories.. nicely done ^^ good job~! |
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Aug 28, 2007, 10:44 AM
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| Re: faceless well thank you for the comment^^...i do kinda wish i knew what she looked like tho..to see if there were similarities...
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