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  1. Aug 27, 2007 11:30 AM #1
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    faceless

    In the night my heart wanders
    trying to find...her
    the one without a face

    When i dream..
    I see her telling me that i deserve better
    a happy home. a good life. a second chance..

    I was blessed with a loving family
    but was also cursed by loneliness..an emptiness
    I could not fulfill alone...

    And when i cried out to understand...
    she vanished without a trace

    ...still remembering...

    I still do not know this faceless woman...
    but wheni think of how i could be..different
    of how my life could've changed....
    NO.

    I blame the faceless woman who chose my destiny
    no questions asked, without my concern
    It was HER fault not I

    And when it all comes down to it
    she wil REMAIN faceless to me
    I'm the best you'll ever have because i am that f*ing AMA-zing chic who can stand on her own d*n feet and becasue of you I am the Greatest Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
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    Re: faceless

    nice poem blackrose92 but it seems a little sad to
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    I was blessed with a loving family
    but was also cursed by loneliness..an emptiness
    this is the way i feel right now,lonely and empty

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    Re: faceless

    I like the way this poem was written^^ It's a GREAT poem and i like it a lot^^ In my opinion you have always written good poems, even though i haven't gotten around to reading them all lol... but i may not be on here for a while... so i thought i would let you know that... ^^ Continue to write them wonderfully^_^
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  4. Aug 27, 2007 12:16 PM #4
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    Re: faceless

    aww^^ thank you both for the feedback i really appreciated it YAY^^
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  5. Aug 28, 2007 07:16 AM #5
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    Re: faceless

    woah...this is much better than last times..

    Hmm...faceless huh...a good way of saying u want to rid her of ur memories.. nicely done ^^ good job~!
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  6. Aug 28, 2007 10:44 AM #6
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    Re: faceless

    well thank you for the comment^^...i do kinda wish i knew what she looked like tho..to see if there were similarities...
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