this is really good, i totally get you... real emotions and deep too. awesome work! keep writing!
Life it seems will fade away
Drifting further every day
Getting lost within myself
Nothing matters no one else
I have lost the will to live
Simply nothing more to give
There is nothing more for me
Need the end to set me free
Things are not what they used to be
Missing one inside of me
Deathly lost, this can't be real
I CANNOT STAND THIS HELL I FEEL!
Emptiness is filling me
To the point of agony
Growing darkness taking dawn
I was me, but now He's gone
No one but me can save myself, but it's too late
Now I can't think, think why I should even try
Yesterday seems as though it never existed
Death greets me warm, now I will just say good-bye
this is really good, i totally get you... real emotions and deep too. awesome work! keep writing!
Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:
Wishing, waiting, dreaming..
lol~ I been waiting for this day~
Bye Shu~ Tell the Grim I said hi~ While he's taking you to he** heehhehehehehe~!!
But then again.. Your loney aren't ya~
lovey poem, I hope not Flase ~
Its a really energetic poem with a lot of emotion
keep them up.![]()
perdoname michelle!
this is a Metallica song "fade to black" from the cd "Ride the lightning"
Hmmm... Very interesting... Impressive choice...
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