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    Fading Away

    Fading away


    As the light of life fades away,
    So does the time we have shared here,
    With our friend and loved ones.
    Not knowing when one life would end,
    and another would begin.

    We know in nine month time,
    a new light and journey has started
    for someone else.

    When one light fades away,
    it’s never easy to say goodbye,
    to someone you hold dear to you.

    Every one has there own way of saying goodbye
    to there love ones .
    And yours is your own.

    At the end of ones journey the doors close.
    Now the doors will open for some new,
    although we may not know who they are.
    But we still wish them the best in there journey of life and
    Hope all there dreams come true as well.



    This was written for
    All the people how have
    Lost someone close to them
    Weather they may be friend or family

    Chrystal Ann Aguilera
    R.I.P little one
    Happy 3rd birthday
    Last edited by chrystalann2004; Dec 05, 2007 at 07:54 AM.

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    Re: Fading Away

    Wow.... How sad. I really enjoyed this poem though. It's flow was interesting to me and made it enjoyable to read. I hope to read more from you. Thanks for posting.

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    Sniffle.......this was a great combination of sad and love poetry.......
    Very nicely done!!!!!
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    Re: Fading Away

    yea.. .sheesh... a creative work... nicely done.. :/ love the wording in this work of yours... the flow was good as well.. interesting read...

    keep it up ^^

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    Re: Fading Away

    thank you every one for all of your feedback
    i am glad you guys like it .

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    Re: Fading Away

    Wow Deanna I really felt that one. sheehs *cries intently* I knew before hand but I didnt know to this extent. Verry nicely done I like how you put your pain and suffering in a poem, kind of like what I do. lol anyways this isnt a laughing matter sorry anyways, I hope to see more from you and I agree with astaroth you have verry creativly put sadness,loss, and love into one poem to sum it up and my prayers to Chrystal ann but you knew that. nice dedication too. hope to see more soon.
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    SO sad! I loved it though! *tears* I dont really know what to say? I'm just... Idont know what i am, it kind of hit me ya know? Ok then Keep up the great work!
    I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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    Re: Fading Away

    thankyou to the both for your feedback
    and yes nathan i knew that and thank it mean alot.
    iam glad you guy like it
    and i should have more soon
    thanks agian

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