Fading away without you-

I am dying, slowly
Bit by bit without you
It started by a confession,
That separated us

I am sorry, I really am
Even if they don’t mean everything without you
I am forlorn, don’t you see?
I am suffering because of what I did …

I love you please don’t leave me,
I miss you please come back
I adore you I cannot live without you
I need you please love me back!

Stab my heart. I'd still live for you~
Leave me and I'll come back,
Even though I want to die I will live-
To see your warm smile again.
That's how much I love you...

I want to be with you again,
I want you to be in my arms,
I love you and I always will
Your presence makes me full of joy

I am happy whenever you’re with me,
I laugh when you do something silly
I don’t want you to love someone else
I have strong feelings for you; I honestly do love you

I am dying as my heart is bleeding
I need you to rescue me,
I want to feel your touch; your presence
I want … to be with you

Everything around me is going dark,
I cannot focus, am I really dying?
No .. I want to live,
But I –

The end…

Sorry about this, this isn’t really a polished poem, so yeah >_>

I really liked it!! it's really depressing actualy... but you express your emotions very well, i can feel the sadness, i can truly tell you love this person. Good work! ^_^

Thats a sweet/cute poem.^^

Sometimes you have to save yourself Rushil~!!

Lovey poem, and could use some work, I hate when I know what is coming next~

Damn, give it a rest already! Focus your poetry on some violence or something..............quit wasting it over bitches!

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Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23

Damn, give it a rest already! Focus your poetry on some violence or something..............quit wasting it over bitches!

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you call women bitches!!!!!!!
and i agree. but it was cute and sweet but it should be over wit

O.o Sounds like you cheated on your loved one :o lol is this on your life or just a poem you wrote :)

It's the whole deal with that Foreverinyourarms chick..........she broke up with him to hook back up with her ex and he's been taking it very badly.